1. Generally its good, but require more conceptual sketches and diagram to explain my approach and concept idea more clearly before proceeding to explain my floor plan.

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2. To add storyline to proposed promenade, etc significance history of Limbang river.

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3. The middle building; maritime centre is crucial to the other 2, show how it connect to the other buildings

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4.  Make this proposal in becoming Limbang's icon and Landmark. (First Impression, Atmosphere is important, it will be a ship's anchor feeling perhaps)